Constructive Criticism

Here we go! We now have our first submissions for critique in hand, and it’s time to get started reviewing the material. But, first…

As you read, please keep in mind that the point of constructive criticism is to help the writer improve the work. The writer shouldn’t take criticism personally, and the readers should be able to deliver their comments in a way that isn’t insulting. Here are some suggestions that may work for you as you critique the first three submissions:

Balance the positive with the negative: As you read the work, please take the time to underline or place asterisks beside sentences, phrases, or passages that you think are well written or work particularly well. Similarly, if there is wording that doesn’t make sense or is unclear, indicate this in the text. This type of specific feedback will help the writer to better understand how well he/she is conveying the story, characters, plot, setting, themes, etc.

Ask questions: If the writer is not getting his/her point(s) across to the reader, let it be known. Otherwise, the writer will assume that everything is clear and well communicated and does not need any improvement. Clearing up any confusion now will save headaches down the line.

Make suggestions: If you think you might have a suggestion that would be helpful to the writer, please add it—either within the margins beside the corresponding text or in a concise paragraph at the end.

Obviously, we’ll have some time to discuss each piece at the upcoming Writers Workshop, but it’s especially helpful for the writer to have notes to take home and digest afterward. Please read slowly, carefully, and thoughtfully, even going over the pieces more than once if you have the time. Remember: it took the writer many agonizing hours and a bit of courage to present this work to you!

Note to writers: take every piece of feedback for what it’s worth, keeping in mind that this is the first time any of us has seen your work and that there are so many different genres in the mix.

If you have any questions about critiquing or constructive criticism, please leave a note in the “Comments” section below or e-mail me at Jen_McInerney@yahoo.com.